Sunday, November 6, 2011

swallow don't spit

and when
it tastes like sadness on your tongue
sinking in and staining -
swallow don't spit

2 comments:

  1. This one pucks a bit of a punch (to further alliterate.)

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  2. I was thinking about this a few hours after I read it, and thought, surely it must have said spit, don't swallow, but of course I was wrong, and there's the real punch.

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